Oh, its been some crazy nights
Flying balcony and glassroom palace
Smell of jasmine and hanging ch...
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Oh, it's been some crazy nights
Flying balcony and glassroom palace
Smell of jasmine and hanging chimes
Casual sofa talks and candlelit romance
Oh, it's been some nights
I've let myself melt
A glacier moving across your ocean
With pelicans and lighthouses as friends
It felt like snow
Or it felt like clouds
But I was like a river
Running deep into you
It felt like butterfly
Sometimes it was like rainbow
I was a painted canvas
Oil pastels to my rescue
I'm still in love tonight
Yes, I tasted like wine
With roses hanging from the wall
Sea shells as decoration
Or as garlands from your hands
I breath down your neck
Your skin so soft I could feel the pulse
Sinking as a knife I feel so juvenile
Excited maybe, but I'd like to feel it fine
I see the sun eclipse
The clouds in my room
White wedding dress rehearsals
Orchids as surprise gifts
Blue stockings and satin looks
And your unbrished hair I use as my veil
Crystals frozen in the midair static
Electric black eyes look so blue in the bonfire
We could sell the paradise to the needy lover duo
We could run back to my balcony into my swinging chair
Smell the snow
Like I do in your presence
Making paper boats
And singing birds in leisure
Or I could sail through the night
When your eyes call me so
The distance in your lips
is where I wanna live
I'm still in love tonight
Close
Reffy Dearie ....
m nt denyin .. m I ???
A person in love is also bound to do stupid things ....
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BL
A person in love can only dole out such creative stuff...
reffy
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SPK ...
Sometimes we do wanna write something that's plain .. simple .. easy .. n sweet ... that's for moments that sounds good .. n feels fine ..
It's jus one of them ..
Cheers
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WL
Thanks so much.. U've always been a sweetheart
Cheers
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Goofffzzz
Ah-Ha.... Jasmine in the room beside the bed !!! That's so sweet BMW...
Still in love .. ain't that feelin so lovely !!!! It's so surprisin n excitin n exhilaratin at the same time !!!!
Thankzzz
Scooobbz
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Hey DP
Damn good man. Come up with watever u gonna write after readin n re-readin it ..
It's gonna be superb ..
Cheers
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But I was like a river
Running deep into you
It felt like butterfly
Sometimes it was like rainbow
I was a painted canvas
Oil pastels to my rescue
Like I do in your presence
Making paper boats
And singing birds in leisure
Or I could sail through the night
When your eyes call me so
The distance in your lips
is where I wanna live
Lovely flow of lines :)
Beautiful :)
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wow beautiful write with nice flow BL..I loved it
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scooby,
You sure are still in love...and sucha lucky one you are.
You made mesee the pelicans and lighthouses...the sea...the rainbows, the butterflies...the flowers..infact a friend left some jasmineflowers for me and I havethem besides me a bowl and the room is fragrant...
that one was a very very beautiful poem...Loved it. very much.
goofy.
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Wow! bloody! This is good! damn good! infact i am feeling like writing something, after i read and re-read it! The flow, was awesome!
Cheerio
DP
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