Fire,
Oh, Could you please?
I love the sensation of burning dreams
Witness a burial
A black soundscape with heartfelt bliss
Hide
Let's get lost
We will rise with the ocean
And give away things we love the most
This is a kill, with a smile
This is madness going blind
Gimme shelter, and a smoke
No canned laughters please, from the TV soap
No sound of guns, or smell of blood
I'm too naive to witness some hurt
Well, we rather just make love
Gimme shelter, and a loving cup !!
Heartbreak
Please give a chance
We could salvage a wet romance
This is a kill, but you see no pain
It's a daffodil passion, rising again and again
We must pray, in times like this
Gimme shelter, and a goodnight kiss
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War, children, it's just a shot away, it's just a shot away.
Love, sister, it's just a kiss away, it's just a kiss away...... Gimme Shelter ...... The Rolling Stones
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**Deeply and erotically inspired by The Rolling Stones**
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Bina
Saw yer couplets ...
n commented too ...
n Thanks
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Supzz....
tell me tell me .. u heard the guitar !!!
Yippeeyy ....
No doubt it's a Keith Riachrd ....
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Dear Goofzzzz
Rolling Stones r erotic best ... n they r deep ....
so ma inspiration was quite on the top ...
hope u get that
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Thanks Reffy ....
i was a bit carried away by the devilish rock n roll sound of the 80's .. that's all
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blimey
just wrote couplets
on all friends at suls
wrote one on u n achii as well
hiope u like it
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blimey
enjoyed this one
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:-)))) Like the dreamy tangy taste of guitar strings in the back ground..
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how deeply and how erotically has this one been inspired???
:-)
liked it.
goofy flappy.
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BL
this is a nice one...
reffy
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