On Fire

May 17 2008  | Views 127 |  Comments  (4)
Everything inside me looks like Everything I hate You are the hope I have for change You are the on... Expand

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  blood_lime posted 2 mnths ago

OIhhhh Reffy .. I admit .. yer analysis is not wrong at all ... and that's why I'm a bit scared .. 



  blood_lime posted 2 mnths ago

Hi Nups ..... 
Gosh .. !!!! I only 've written .. wat I felt ... for a moment ... otherwise there's nothing in this that couldn't be felt .. unless the fire takes someone in ... it's like .. a cvold fire .. burnin up the midnight .. in its awake ... n all I could do is to look at it like a sidewinder .. n write some verse ... 

Nothing gives much peace either .. but that fire only keeps things alive .. 

B_L

 



  reflector posted 2 mnths ago

BL,

passion and fire...nice one..see my analysis is not that wrong...

reffy



  keyaa1 posted 2 mnths ago

BL

Gosh...What have you wrtten here

Thousand screams ..silent ones.... dissolve into tears ...and become the stars...

Touching

Nupur





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