Let There Be....Magic

  May 22 2008  | Views 640 |  Comments  (24)
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  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Hello EW ... 
Ohkayyy... I kno that wasn't convincin enuf .. !!! but still I tried. Isn't it ?? 
No, I'm trying to see if El gets what he is lookin for .. whether he'll die thinkin of her ... whether he will cut out his heart n put it on a tray to face magic again ... maybe that'll be another magic from his sleeves !!! 

And the creator is busy in some personal stuff so he isn't going for any new posts ... and there.. is no magic dear. 

The nights r simply not enuf I kno. One or Two, whatsoever. But I guess it'll be a stark contrasting one to tell that if I anytime finish my next story soon, that's gonna be another chilling one. Where the magic doesn't cast its spell on the clouds n make it a shiny day. 
But no doubt, I'm still dwellin on ma darker side. And this is lotsa like Anakin Skywalker before he went on to become Darth Vader. 

Cheerio



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

Ya ,umm ok....if someone dying in love and in trust, can be termed happy, well...

 

ET and El, its a perfect picture for this one, when ET is well and happy, el was and wen he gets sick, el gets too.....so it is another story of connections...I understand that very well....have you heard of something called willing death or inviting death or sadness by thinking very intensely about it.....

 

So ur el must die too....unless he breaks the connection with magic and magic too....that’s the offbeat side of this story....the next part too....where he rips his heart out of his ribcage, raw and red blood....n sacrifices it in a gurgling brewing pot f life....just to live...just to exist....that image calls for a sequel limey...

 

n in time how el chooses to sacrifice a mere existence and reunites with magic and magic too, in a different realm..a selfless warrior of light kinda…..maybe that will be the happy story to come....

 

And I guess in the minds of the creators of these magic tales, we all should will happiness and real magic, maybe a concentrated effort, a journey that seeks and will find, will bring a story as thus....

 

I hope the midnight moons burn the oils in your night lamps, and a happy magical one brews....

 

Since I haven’t seen any new posts...I guess one night is just not enuf....



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Kamalji .. wah wah jii ... Black Label ??? Arreeehhhh .... with soda ?? or lime ??? 

let's raise the toast for that sir ... 
Cheers



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Swayam ... 

It is always good to see u here ... 
So u think I did a good job by killin Magic in the end??? Might be. 
Yes, She died for him. What a waste. But when she closed her eyes and took her last breath atleast she had this thought in her mind that he loves her so much. She died happily. It was never meant to end this way. A love story is never meant to end this way, but again, what is a love story if there is no tragedu attached to it ?? 

Someone said that in order to narrate a great love story there should be aloads of tragic. Then u can realize the true magnitude of the love. I guess that was what I thought wen I wrote this. 

But then, someone's love killed someone. Someone died for someone. And something died too. I remeber long time back one fellow blogger asked me how can I sleep after writing such grisly tales ?? 

I guess all these dead faces r starting to crowd my sleeping space for sometime. 
There will be blood. And Limey just loves it that way. 

Cheers.



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Vish ... 
Point taken Mister. And no, please don't mess around with that dear handle of mine, Oh please !!! 
And before u could jump aboard to actually petition to change th ename .. I might try some happy go lucky stories. 

Cheers



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Hi EW... again ... I won't say I wasn't hoping to face that kinda question. But I wasn't wishing on all falling stars to face it u kno !!! 

There can b a truly magically innocent n heavenly love story .. n it also might not end in tragedy ... there can b dear. And I kno there r so many. Well, about in the mind of the creator .. I dunno .. maybe yer Question will ignite the night lamp to burn the moon n write a love story that .. atleast .. ends with a happy note.

There's one mo thing I wanted to say EW. And I'm saying it coz.. ok .. to b frank .. I'm cornered. I jus wanna talk about my story .. or all stories... where beneath the words there lies something else... lemme point one thing ... Elliot !!! that's the kid who was in ET. And the short form of it, El !! u'll know. and then... one thing that I wasn't willing to expose.. I didn't paint him as an innocent one. He is selfish.. who cared mo about his powers than her. Maybe he learned from her death, maybe didn't. But that's not the point.

The point is, dear, the story ended on a happy note. How ??

She died loving him, knowing that he loves her. Now isn't that a happy ending?

I'll wait for yer response. Surely.

 



  enchanted world posted 3 mnths ago

So limey,

Things can go wrong. Even in the best of love stories. 

Let me cut to the chase, cant there be a truly magically innocent love story that doesn’t end in tragedy? At least in the minds of the creators of these tales who is  looking at a world that still hasn't gone to dogs? At least in stories? At least once a while...

U get me? Why is it that all those intense deep stories gravitate to tragedy? It’s as if even we don’t believe in the magic that we love so much...hai na?

Was waiting for ur re-com to see what ya said. You can choose not to ans, I perfectly understand...coz if I was asked that question, I might chose silence over words :) Or more frankly, wud ans with a - I really don’t know...as to main aisa kyun hu :)

As nup.. says, the magic is the journey, I know that too :) And the belief, the faith and trust!



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Hello EW 

I liked those twists n turns. it seems U delved a bit in there. Will certainly make a point to check yer post. The thing about wat u said .. the connection of tales and the culmination of many schools of unadulterated natural some things.... yes.. I saw that .... n the thought that how innocense should be there in the minds of the creatures who loves magic n every other means to lost themselves. 

She was a gal whose innocense knew no bounds. So when she found him and his power .. I'm a bit wonderin what really shook her world. But then, she wasn't into power that much. For her, love was the vital thing, the magic came second. It's like certain things that can't b described. She loved him endlessly coz he was the one who showed her the beauty she possessed, the innocense, the magic she had !!! she had all her reasons to fall in love with him. And he on the other hand was the one who fell in love with her coz she understood him. It works both ways. Both of them fell in love with each other coz they understood, they held themselves in their embrace. 

Things can go wrong. Even in the best of love stories. And though, I didn't want to make magic as the central character, but no doubt it is the one thing that kept everything together, and wen the time came, it destroyed everything also. There my dear, is the tragedy.
What nourishes them, also destroyes them. 

it
is also about a world that doesn't care to understand things beyond them, who r too busy with thwir own lives  that they don't see what there is to see. That's about being blind. And they wanted to let go of this world, and make their own. Everyone wants that, don't they ?? To make a world of thir own? But there r some prices to pay. Some sacrifices needs to be done, some things needs to be left behind. I feel sad the story ended this way, but then, there was no other way I could end this. 

I loved yer comment, and yer take on this. 
The creator of this tale is atleast looking at a world that still hasn't gone to dogs. 

Cheers



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Charuavi .. 

Nice but sad !! Ahhhaahhha .... U know what they say about nice people finishin last !!! Nice stories sometimes gotta be sad... anyway ... it's nice of u to come n like it .... Really nice... n there ain't anything sad about it .. 



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Rutuja .. 

Yes.. it is kinda inspired by both of them fabulous stories.. jus added a small pinch of tragedy here .. that's it ... 

Thanks





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