Look out now
As the sky drops on my head
Like carefree flowers, a white umbrella
Soaked in life's very own crux
Making love in my unkempt bed
"Love you so" after every sentence
Did you tie my hair
Like a prom queen on holiday
Waterfalls and sunflowers party hours
Drinking from your cup of laughter
Jumping in the rainforest for some fresh air
Living free and feeling disappeared
Oh, Summer in here
Tastes like strawberry
In my last letter
Daffodill hours
Well, I do sometimes
Feel like the unborn child
In your womb lays the love for two
Sending letters for the familiar kind
For you ! A blowing kiss might do
Midnight movies and cooking breakfast
Nightwears, bedtime stories, greeting cards
Remind me to take the garbage out
Could wait for a smoke if you don't ask
Football fields for the twosome corner
Young lovers crossing their first kiss border
I know now, summer was here
Tastes like strawberry
In my last letter
Wallflower hours
Hey, look out now
Before I tuck you in a bed to dreams
Sprinkling wishing stars on your forehead
Paperbacks under the light so easily
A hairband, bathed in your jasmine
I never forget the goodnight kiss
Wrap it in a flower vase
In the hallway, I carried my shower
You love music before you fall asleep
Well, Yes, summer was here
Tastes like your salt
In my last letter
Magnolia hours
Summer was here
Tastes like blue satin
My last letter
Always return to sender
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P.S. - For someone who doesn't wanna marry a Mama's Boy !!!
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Hell Sup ...u don't wanna marry !!! That's sad babe....

mama's boy or not .. but hello !!! what'll happen to the guys then who'r jus waiting to be tortured by u gal !!!
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Ekkzzz babe .. if it didn't get much attention but atleast it did something .. it got u bac in ma space honey ...
ok .. yes . relationshipds r difficult .. they r just like a baby ... they need proper nourishin.. proper attention.. proper care .. andyes. sharing is ofcourse imp.. jus sometimes i get in a dilemma what to share n what not to .. especially if the relation is under a storm ... but I hope i made it wrong .. she loves me , right !! so she should know what I know ...it's all about being together n facin it ....
i really don't forget the goodnight kiss .. jus sometimes .... can't give it though
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Awwwwww BMW ... u got me sulkin babe !!!!
all boys love their mama's thats true,
but tha gal who'll leave hers for you.
needs to feel that you love her best.
cause she has left her world behind on your behest.
to build a life witth you,
Now that was so true.... made me sad in the way lovers could be ..... n about that Mama's Boy .. she likes to call me that ... maybe I'm ... anyway .. that was something only a gal could tell me .... so Thanx Goofzzzie
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I dont wanna marry - least of all mama's boys..
But this one was beautiful.. last letter before winter - the summer was in full bloom here.
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hiii,
The poem potrayed the picture of a gurl with stars in her crown...n bliss in her sleep...love can b sometimes harsh...wen it comes just in a way...it has to b heard without spoken...muual understanding comes when mutual word makes a mean...i guess...caring is kool but sharing is more imp. in any relationship n that is very very imp. Like infact loved the poem n specially that lullaby, sleep stars, jasmines...loved it...
loved the line
n i never forgot the goodnite kiss...
Ekziee
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Scooby,
Those were beautiful words they were...
You a mama's boy? sigh...
all boys love their mama's thats true,
but tha gal who'll leave hers for you.
needs to feel that you love her best.
cause she has left her world behind on your behest.
to build a life witth you,
a world of your own painted in shades of red, pink and blue.
She wants to know You are a unit both of you agaisnt the world,
she doesn't want a mama's boy to start loving his mama less.
she just wants him to love Her more I guess.
Thats what I feel she wants. Cause thats what she is giving you ...loving you better than she loved her dad.
goffy tha grin...
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Subbu sir ...
Life could be predestined .. but who's seen it anyways !!! touching those lines and making it comin full is wat we do best ... reachin destinations ... n the irony is the destination we decide to touch upon chnages from time to time ... so there lies the rub
mutual understandings r good to talk about ... n wen it comes to the point .. there's nothing much mutual about it ... off balance .. that's how life could be sometimes ...
indeed liked yer comment ... n Thanx for visiting ...
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Yes our dear Bloodlime,
Beautifully expressed longings, anticipations and answers seen in this poetic lines.
Life is a match of destined destinations and no one can escape without touching it.
Don't count upon open promises, broken relationships and work towards mutual understandings to fulfill each ones desires and goals.
Subbu
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