Last Letter Before Winter

  May 2 2008  | Views 136 |  Comments  (8)
Look out now As the sky drops on my head Like carefree flowers, a white umbrella Soaked in life's ... Expand

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  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Hell Sup ...u don't wanna marry !!! That's sad babe.... 
mama's boy or not .. but hello !!! what'll happen to the guys then who'r jus waiting to be tortured by u gal !!!   



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Ekkzzz babe .. if it didn't get much attention but atleast it did something .. it got u bac in ma space honey ...  ok .. yes . relationshipds r difficult .. they r just like a baby ... they need proper nourishin.. proper attention.. proper care .. andyes. sharing is ofcourse imp.. jus sometimes i get in a dilemma what to share n what not to .. especially if the relation is under a storm ... but I hope i made it wrong .. she loves me , right !! so she should know what I know ...it's all about being together n facin it ....

i really don't forget the goodnight kiss .. jus sometimes .... can't give it though



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Awwwwww BMW ... u got me sulkin babe !!!! 

all boys love their mama's thats true,
but tha gal who'll leave hers for you.
needs to feel that you love her best.
cause she has left her world behind on your behest.
to build a life witth you,

Now that was so true.... made me sad in the way lovers could be ..... n about that Mama's Boy .. she likes to call me that ...  maybe I'm ... anyway .. that was something only a gal could tell me .... so Thanx Goofzzzie



  supriyad posted 3 mnths ago

I dont wanna marry - least of all mama's boys.. 

But this one was beautiful.. last letter before winter - the summer was in full bloom here.



  ektabhandari posted 3 mnths ago

hiii,
The poem potrayed the picture of a gurl with stars in her crown...n bliss in her sleep...love can b sometimes harsh...wen it comes just in a way...it has to b heard without spoken...muual understanding comes when mutual word makes a mean...i guess...caring is kool but sharing is more imp. in any relationship n that is very very imp. Like infact loved the poem n specially that lullaby, sleep stars, jasmines...loved it...

loved the line
n i never forgot the goodnite kiss...

Ekziee



  blackmagicwoman posted 3 mnths ago

Scooby,

Those were beautiful words they were...
You a mama's boy? sigh...
all boys love their mama's thats true,
but tha gal who'll leave hers for you.
needs to feel that you love her best.
cause she has left her world behind on your behest.
to build a life witth you,
a world of your own painted in shades of red, pink and blue.
She wants to know You are a unit both of you agaisnt the world,
she doesn't want a mama's boy to start loving his mama less.
she just wants him to love Her more I guess.


Thats what I feel she wants. Cause thats what she is giving you ...loving you better than she loved her dad.

goffy tha grin...



  blood_lime posted 3 mnths ago

Subbu sir ... 

Life could be predestined .. but who's seen it anyways !!! touching those lines and making it comin full is wat we do best ... reachin destinations ... n the irony is the destination we decide to touch upon chnages from time to time ... so there lies the rub 

mutual understandings r good to talk about ... n wen it comes to the point .. there's nothing much mutual about it ... off balance .. that's how life could be sometimes ... 

indeed liked yer comment ... n Thanx for visiting ...



  purefriendship posted 3 mnths ago

Yes our dear Bloodlime,

Beautifully expressed longings, anticipations and answers seen in this poetic lines.

Life is a match of destined destinations and no one can escape without touching it.

Don't count upon open promises, broken relationships and work towards mutual understandings to fulfill each ones desires and goals.

Subbu





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