The Story Of A Poem

  Oct 12 2007  | Views 845 |  Comments  (33)
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  blood_lime posted 10 mnths ago

I've been trying to acces ma page .. or to say .. the net .. but couldn't get ma hand on any of it .. OK .. now atlast ... it's working ... after a blasting weekend I'm back to ma page .. n here wat I see !!!!
 
Meera ... Thanx for the comment ... n thanx for reading it ... n thanx for watever reasons ... but thanx ..
 
Sunita ..... n that's lovely .. Thanx for that sunny
 
Womanslove (!!!!) ... I wondered wat that name has to do ???  yeh ... it looks beautiful !!! the structure needs to b good man .. it holds the attention first ... n sharin is the in thing here ...
 
 
Achi ... minds defers .. coz mine's not yers n yers not mine .... noone walks in other's shoes .. so mayb that's y .. wat's hollow for u could mean everything to somebody else .. didn't they say that one man's meat is another man's poison ???  wat is good for me might not be better for u .. way of the world !!! but thanx for yer judgement .. though they say not to wait for the last judgement ..  coz it takes place everyday
 
Ehsaas ... I'm caught up in between, sideways, bothways ... n noways ... but caught up indeed .. Thanx
 
Radhika ... not only poetry... but i guess most of the thing comes from the heart !!! n wen yer heart is full .. it will pour out .. mayb sometimes in less than five minutes !!!
 
Sweets ... Whoa !!!!!!!!!  me got caught up in the contagious whoasssssss  
 
Enchant .... it's a story.. that could take place irrelevent of the time, space.... n person ... gettin caught up ... n gettin tangled .. n untangled ... it's all in the game .. yet, it's a story .. anyhow
 
Seshu ... though there were no words .. but i got the hint ...  thanx



  SESHU CHAMARTY posted 10 mnths ago

Wow. No words to express.



  enchanted world posted 10 mnths ago

bl,

 

Somehow caught up in between...

Somehow you can still untangle...

Concurrence on the fossils of dreams

Yet it’s a story, of someone, somehow

:)

 



  SwEeTnSiMpLe posted 10 mnths ago

Hey blood_lime,
 
Whoa ! Whatte beauty....
 
cheers
sweets



  cradhika posted 10 mnths ago

 Nice poem on poem. For me poetry comes from the heart. When its there  in the heart or the head, it takes only five minutes to come out on paper.
 



  Ehsaas posted 10 mnths ago

somehow i got  caught  up in between.... original and fiction.. Liked rading it..u have expressed the feelings so well in words..
 



  Achillees posted 10 mnths ago

Nice but very hollow...use both your head and heart together to write...Lack of expression...otherwise nice vocabulary...read it again and you will know what i mean.
Anyways keep up the gud wrk.  Hope to find something more better next time.
 
C YA
 
Achilles



  womanslove posted 10 mnths ago

 
   I like the structure of this poem...it flowed nicely thanks for sharing.



  chiksunny posted 10 mnths ago

Bloodlime
That's a beauty...woven with lovely meaningful words and laced with deep longing!
Sunita



  Meera San posted 10 mnths ago

That is pretty intense and beautiful...
 
Meera





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